It's been days since the darkness fell
All so black, without a ray of hope
I survived in the corner
But with a broken heart and a rusting mind
Thoughts were dying..and
There is nothing left to do in the dense ebony
Oh! who shines now in this lost street of distress?
The comet.. lighting up it's way through all the long
Why so late? Why right now?
Can I make a wish?.. or do I?
I love this moment
And for a moment, I wished it would stay.
In the time so back, it did appear before
Vanishing before I made the wish, leaving me to ruin
Life's a big circle..
May be it's a spiral which fools us around
I see shooting stars in the distance
I wonder why I should make the wish
Life's a spiral
Oh yes, I'm at it's center
The comet comes to me
But I know it'll leave a wish and pass through me
Why am I not moving?.. neither in, nor out
Where am I stuck.. I wonder!
My poems do not rhyme at all !! :P
Poetry!!!
ReplyDeleteEt is evolving into a more complex being for sure;
Someday somewhere the light will shine,
and ahoy! Who is that creature so bald?
Is that a single strand of hair on its head?
Or is it a halo above eyes as dark as coal?
Lolzzz... Sorry Et. Didn't mean to steal your thunder. But what happened??? Why sad?
And the comic strip is awesome. But remove that cutie from the way of the scorching sun! He's melting!!!
Keep writing poems now & then!
Cheers
@ chocz
ReplyDeleteHmm u really make me write poems ageen! :D
Not sad though, it evolved out of an idle sensation during this vacatn. The pic was my random try on GIMP!
And u'r micro-poem is also awesome! :)
hey,
ReplyDeletenice one man...
I too am going through the same stuff that ur poem is describing... ;)
et et cheers man, et is into poems.. and thats was a nice try :)
ReplyDeleteNow In Obnoxious Mind
@ Nim
ReplyDeleteThank Uu! You too an engineer huh? There's every probability that u'll pass thru the same stuff! :D
@ Shravan
Tnks!
Aww.. a frnship-brk! See.. everyone's gotta second chance :) You don't need to let this go.
hmmm... :|
ReplyDeleteNot all poems have to rhyme, if they have a lilt they are gud enuf! and so is urs :)
ReplyDeleteI love these lines the best -
Life's a big circle..
May be it's a spiral which fools us around
I see shooting stars in the distance
I wonder why I should make the wish
Life's a spiral
Oh yes, I'm at it's center
The comet comes to me
But I know it'll leave a wish and pass through me sometimes NOWHERE is you gotta be
sometimes life, you've to let it be
spirals or helix, life comes a full circle
and that's what sets you free :)
Poems do not have to rhyme I think.
ReplyDeleteYou made your point, and let the word play amuse the world. :)
@ princess
ReplyDeleteHey u've made up a better ending! And i loved that!! :D Makes more sense!!
@ Shadowthorne
yeah u'r right, it's just the word play.. and sometimes amazingly they rhyme too! :O